05-21-2012, 03:25 PM
Thank you Billy and Addy 
First edit up, not a massive edit, a couple of visuals changed to more garden based metaphors. Will work on the barb-wire line. I get what you mean Billy, not sure how to fix it yet.
Indie.

First edit up, not a massive edit, a couple of visuals changed to more garden based metaphors. Will work on the barb-wire line. I get what you mean Billy, not sure how to fix it yet.
Indie.
"Poets are shameless with their experiences: they exploit them." - Friedrich Nietzsche

