2012, a world report (some adult language and potentially disturbing imagery)
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2012, a world report (some adult language and potentially disturbing imagery)
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05-13-2012, 04:31 PM
Updated. I'm going for some degree of absurdism with this.. mainly I think I want to convey the hopelessness that is our much conflicted humanity. I like what I did with the 3rd stanza but I doubt it will come off right. I'm really struggling with the commas and rhythm but, oh well, I'll get there if I'm serious enough.
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2012, a world report (some adult language and potentially disturbing imagery) - by Chaotic Body - 05-10-2012, 07:05 PM
RE: 2012, a world report (some adult language and potentially disturbing imagery) - by addy - 05-11-2012, 09:57 AM
RE: 2012, a world report (some adult language and potentially disturbing imagery) - by Philatone - 05-13-2012, 03:31 PM
RE: 2012, a world report (some adult language and potentially disturbing imagery) - by Chaotic Body - 05-13-2012, 04:31 PM
RE: 2012, a world report (some adult language and potentially disturbing imagery) - by billy - 05-14-2012, 11:33 AM
RE: 2012, a world report (some adult language and potentially disturbing imagery) - by Indie - 05-19-2012, 06:27 PM
RE: 2012, a world report (some adult language and potentially disturbing imagery) - by Erthona - 05-20-2012, 05:12 PM
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