05-06-2012, 08:43 PM
Quote:e) Apart from the serious and mild critique forums, feedback given will be down to the person giving it unless you state what kind of feedback is okay, if any. The onus is on the poet to let the reader know.
I don't know what 'onus' means- I don't think most people will and they won't look it up either. I didn't even Google it and I work here :p
Maybe something more down-to-earth.
Quote:Rules flagged '***' do not apply within The Sewer and The Pig's Arse, which are hidden to protect the innocent. To gain access, join The Sewer, or The Pig's Arse via your User C P.
Should be 'User CP'
Quote:While we can't envisage all future actions on your part, we can and will use our discretionary powers to ban, spank, or butter your buttock area with withering warnings. Please don't abuse our civility.
I don't think you should try to be funny when the rules are very seriously stated.