Hourglass

Hourglass

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#11

05-03-2012, 10:42 AM

for me the progression of edits to this state of being is almost exceptional.
a great job of workshopping the piece geoff. this grew into a really good poem.
thanks for the edits

billy

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Hourglass - by Philatone - 04-27-2012, 05:46 AM

RE: Hourglass - by abu nuwas - 04-27-2012, 08:01 AM

RE: Hourglass - by Philatone - 04-27-2012, 11:42 AM

RE: Hourglass - by abu nuwas - 04-27-2012, 09:55 PM

RE: Hourglass - by billy - 04-27-2012, 04:06 PM

RE: Hourglass - by tectak - 04-27-2012, 07:51 PM

RE: Hourglass - by Erthona - 04-29-2012, 06:18 PM

RE: Hourglass - by Philatone - 05-01-2012, 10:06 AM

RE: Hourglass - by tectak - 05-01-2012, 05:26 PM

RE: Hourglass - by Erthona - 05-03-2012, 10:32 AM

RE: Hourglass - by billy - 05-03-2012, 10:42 AM

RE: Hourglass - by Philatone - 05-03-2012, 01:23 PM

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