04-29-2012, 06:18 PM
Geoff,
Just an idea. Starting in present tense makes a cleaner separation between the two states in time.
Back from the hospital,
I find a plate of frosted tangerine slices
in the back of the fridge:
peeled curls, unfastened,
return my thoughts to you,
wilted in a slender gown in a sterile room
Dale
Just an idea. Starting in present tense makes a cleaner separation between the two states in time.
Back from the hospital,
I find a plate of frosted tangerine slices
in the back of the fridge:
peeled curls, unfastened,
return my thoughts to you,
wilted in a slender gown in a sterile room
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.