Hourglass

[abu nuwas]

hey abu!

thanks for the time and read. I wasn't entirely sure if you meant the poem's foundation was terrible or that the sentiments were just depressing (I do need to find happier topics). do you feel as though anything was overwhelming?

again, appreciate the feedback

No, I should have said 'frightening' or something like that. For what is worth, (and I am not sure I have any business critiquing on the serious forum), my thought was that it did what it set out to do well.