A Hidden Secret

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Hi Passionate Poet,

Its always good to see a fresh face and some new ideas come into the forum. As I read your poem I couldn't help but think that the title was redundant. All secrets are hidden. Maybe you could find something more unique to this little voyage you've taken me on with you

Like some of the others I wished for a little punctuation at times- I don't mean to 'pile on'.

Thanks for sharing