Hourglass
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hey abu!

thanks for the time and read. I wasn't entirely sure if you meant the poem's foundation was terrible or that the sentiments were just depressing (I do need to find happier topics). do you feel as though anything was overwhelming?

again, appreciate the feedback
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Hourglass - by Philatone - 04-27-2012, 05:46 AM
RE: Hourglass - by abu nuwas - 04-27-2012, 08:01 AM
RE: Hourglass - by Philatone - 04-27-2012, 11:42 AM
RE: Hourglass - by abu nuwas - 04-27-2012, 09:55 PM
RE: Hourglass - by billy - 04-27-2012, 04:06 PM
RE: Hourglass - by tectak - 04-27-2012, 07:51 PM
RE: Hourglass - by Erthona - 04-29-2012, 06:18 PM
RE: Hourglass - by Philatone - 05-01-2012, 10:06 AM
RE: Hourglass - by tectak - 05-01-2012, 05:26 PM
RE: Hourglass - by Erthona - 05-03-2012, 10:32 AM
RE: Hourglass - by billy - 05-03-2012, 10:42 AM
RE: Hourglass - by Philatone - 05-03-2012, 01:23 PM



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