After the anniversary
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addy (+aish)-
will have a look at the tenses. think i'll keep it present. Thank you for the kind words and time!

tec-
we can agree to disagree on the breaks, though I'm working on a piece that I think will be somewhat closer to what you favor. I'm glad that no other complaints come to mind as of now; thank you for your time and critical eye, as always. They are appreciated!
Written only for you to consider.
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After the anniversary - by Philatone - 04-18-2012, 05:11 AM
RE: After the anniversary - by Aish - 04-19-2012, 12:16 PM
RE: After the anniversary - by Philatone - 04-19-2012, 12:37 PM
RE: After the anniversary - by Aish - 04-19-2012, 02:49 PM
RE: After the anniversary - by billy - 04-20-2012, 10:12 AM
RE: After the anniversary - by tectak - 04-23-2012, 05:59 PM
RE: After the anniversary - by Philatone - 04-21-2012, 11:47 AM
RE: After the anniversary - by addy - 04-23-2012, 11:08 AM
RE: After the anniversary - by Philatone - 04-24-2012, 01:27 PM



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