04-20-2012, 10:12 AM
(04-18-2012, 05:11 AM)Philatone Wrote: our vase is emptyi like it, i think it's more tongue in cheek than profound. it almost an anthropomorphism of the vase and works well.
like a womb.
Petals limped from the counter
as her water was unhooked
and released into the sink.
We found her a cabinet
to stay where dust grays
every curve of glass great image,
behind a thick door to silence
the thirst that will come;
day or night,
shadow hollows her stomach
into a quarry
where roses once opened,
blossomed, kneeled, should it be knelt?
and hung.
it could be read on a few levels though for me it's straight forward and fun. "you put the vase away when the flowers were dead" no nit's really. it did make me think which isn't hard to do

personally i'd have a preferred the cap
thanks for the read.
