04-19-2012, 12:37 PM
hello aish! thank you so much for the time, read, and words!
I can certainly capitalize the first line; ideally, i wanted the title to run into the poem, but perhaps the separation is too much. thanks also for sharing your thoughts; it helps me to see the piece in a new way myself
I can certainly capitalize the first line; ideally, i wanted the title to run into the poem, but perhaps the separation is too much. thanks also for sharing your thoughts; it helps me to see the piece in a new way myself
Written only for you to consider.