After the anniversary
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V. 2 all present tense

after the anniversary


Our vase is empty
like a womb.

Petals limp from the counter
as her water is unhooked

and released into the sink.
We find her a cabinet

to stay where dust grays
every curve of glass

behind a thick door to silence
the thirst that will come;

day or night,
shadow hollows her stomach

into a quarry
where roses once opened,

blossomed, kneeled,
and hung.




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edit: changed "our" to "Our" (aish, billy)


Our vase is empty
like a womb.

Petals limped from the counter
as her water was unhooked

and released into the sink.
We found her a cabinet

to stay where dust grays
every curve of glass

behind a thick door to silence
the thirst that will come;

day or night,
shadow hollows her stomach

into a quarry
where roses once opened,

blossomed, kneeled,
and hung.
Written only for you to consider.
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After the anniversary - by Philatone - 04-18-2012, 05:11 AM
RE: After the anniversary - by Aish - 04-19-2012, 12:16 PM
RE: After the anniversary - by Philatone - 04-19-2012, 12:37 PM
RE: After the anniversary - by Aish - 04-19-2012, 02:49 PM
RE: After the anniversary - by billy - 04-20-2012, 10:12 AM
RE: After the anniversary - by tectak - 04-23-2012, 05:59 PM
RE: After the anniversary - by Philatone - 04-21-2012, 11:47 AM
RE: After the anniversary - by addy - 04-23-2012, 11:08 AM
RE: After the anniversary - by Philatone - 04-24-2012, 01:27 PM



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