(adult sexual content) Motionless

[Chaotic Body]

there are some observational highs in this piece but the translation into the written word falls short almost everytime. This is like a good singer singing the wrong song.......then when asked it turns out to be a self composition

Yeah I did question this myself the other day:

-If I write about flowers it's all good, powerful
-If I try to describe sex or anything hugely niche like this is to me, it's not powerful. Writing relies on existing associations to pull off -anything-

Good stories are effective because they tap into the rich understanding we have of those meanings.

So, yeah, I'm fooling myself by not respecting the fundamentals here.