04-13-2012, 10:18 PM
" fully consensual,"
If it is fully consensual, then there is no helplessness or really much of the perverse. It becomes perverse when it is a dead body he is having sex with, because of our objections about "fucking" with the dead.
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"Can you point me to some good examples for poems with a lot of cadence?"
Walt Whitman, "Leaves of Grass"".
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"It's also very hard to compete with visual media. A picture or a film will always trump a graphic written display."
Yeah, Todd put it succinctly here, and why it probably won't work.. This seems very much what you seem to be attempting, I could not put my finger on it before.
Dale
If it is fully consensual, then there is no helplessness or really much of the perverse. It becomes perverse when it is a dead body he is having sex with, because of our objections about "fucking" with the dead.
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"Can you point me to some good examples for poems with a lot of cadence?"
Walt Whitman, "Leaves of Grass"".
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"It's also very hard to compete with visual media. A picture or a film will always trump a graphic written display."
Yeah, Todd put it succinctly here, and why it probably won't work.. This seems very much what you seem to be attempting, I could not put my finger on it before.
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.