03-22-2012, 09:23 PM
(03-20-2012, 09:01 PM)Bronte Wrote: guys!! all I see is two blokes one hitting on the other and the other in turn popping him open with his gi tarNot Brokeback Mountain
like that cowboy movie!
which I have not seen I must be getting old.
or have a very naughty mind about making music
(03-20-2012, 10:21 PM)Todd Wrote: Yeah, I see that with a slight werewolf overtone (torches and dogs and the like).Not the Wolfman
(03-20-2012, 09:01 PM)Bronte Wrote: guys!! all I see is two blokes one hitting on the other and the other in turn popping him open with his gi tar
like that cowboy movie!
which I have not seen I must be getting old.
or have a very naughty mind about making music
(03-22-2012, 04:44 PM)Erthona Wrote: Why do I think there is some cannibalism about to happen?Because you are always right
I'm working on another rewrite. Even though this isn't what I want it to be, it is much closer. Thanks to everyone for the feedback.