03-18-2012, 12:44 PM
Not sure I follow you on the sound thing, Joan -- in a sonnet, I'd say repetition of sound (if not entire words, even if the words are only two letters!) is a fairly desirable thing, so long as it's not overdone.
Sonnets have 14 lines anyway, so I'm allowed a bit of leeway :p
Sonnets have 14 lines anyway, so I'm allowed a bit of leeway :p
It could be worse
