Metamorphoses

[Bronte]

But it is the AHH! Sound that grates , did I say lazy? Yes I did .
I was merely slapping you for feeing so “Ahh! It hurts” in the those of writing. I bet you can knock at least two woh-begotten ahhhhhs! out .

if nothing else I bet you looked closer grins

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Which is why I feel compelled to point out that despite three "as"s, there's only one bloody simile!

I'll only redraft if the suggestion offered is an improvement, never simply for the sake of tinkering, and certainly never to shut up a whinger :p

I hope you are training the little brats so extra marks will be given if they can construct a poem of 10 lines and only use each word once. Hell that will challenge their active minds.

I’m almost tempted to try it myself! Lol