01-16-2012, 10:57 PM
(01-16-2012, 09:02 PM)billy Wrote: i'm presuming you want it all kept together?That was my original intent. And also my intent was not to repeat the end word, but rather imply it.
This is what we have so far:
better men have tried
and tried
and true
believers hope
burns like a candle
in the wind
beneath my wings

