Converse

Converse

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01-16-2012, 04:19 PM

Great edit. Smile

I like the additional image in the first stanza, as it immediately establishes a context of tension, and sides. Lovely work

PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?

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Converse - by Philatone - 01-13-2012, 08:41 AM

RE: Converse - by addy - 01-13-2012, 05:19 PM

RE: Converse - by Philatone - 01-13-2012, 10:25 PM

RE: Converse - by Wildcard - 01-14-2012, 12:05 AM

RE: Converse - by Philatone - 01-16-2012, 01:35 PM

RE: Converse - by addy - 01-16-2012, 04:19 PM

RE: Converse - by Erthona - 01-17-2012, 02:21 AM

RE: Converse - by abu nuwas - 01-20-2012, 07:12 AM

RE: Converse - by popeye - 01-20-2012, 09:48 AM

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