12-18-2009, 09:51 PM
you choose. it's your poem 
but try ad make it work with the part you're keeping.
i wouldn't try and turn it into a haiku cos it works as a simple short poem.
(in my opinion )

but try ad make it work with the part you're keeping.
i wouldn't try and turn it into a haiku cos it works as a simple short poem.
(in my opinion )
