bird
#4
you choose. it's your poem Smile
but try ad make it work with the part you're keeping.
i wouldn't try and turn it into a haiku cos it works as a simple short poem.
(in my opinion )
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bird - by srijantje - 12-18-2009, 08:57 PM
RE: bird - by billy - 12-18-2009, 09:08 PM
RE: bird - by srijantje - 12-18-2009, 09:14 PM
RE: bird - by billy - 12-18-2009, 09:51 PM



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