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12-18-2009, 04:36 AM

Finite sensations
shivering penetrations
vision's fleeting wing

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Are you alluding to me?

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12-18-2009, 07:23 AM

(12-18-2009, 04:36 AM)Benny2guns Wrote: Finite sensations
shivering penetrations
vision's fleeting wing

way to go benny.
is it about eskimo sex? Smile

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just kidding. it screams frostbite
thanks for posting.

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