The silence hurts

[babeismijnkat]

You've got an interesting piece here, with some turns of phrase I really like. I really love "wisdom is hiding // in missing parts of us".

There are some problems with grammar in a few parts: for instance, in the second stanza: "I speak in dry tears// They reveal by your// silent apologies." Should instead be "... They reveal at your// silent apologies." ? Not sure I'm reading it correctly, though. Also the final line should read I think read as "...to start// loving each other".

In the final stanza, the first line seems out of place: Until when? Until wisdom is no longer hiding? (I'm just making a guess) I think this line needs a bit more context.

Other than that, I think this is a very promising piece. Thanks for sharing

thank you for the feedback!
I find the grammar very difficult in this language and it's not my mother tongue, so..

Yes, you're right about that. I will work it out!