01-02-2012, 09:20 AM
Interesting. Just think if I'd given you something more to work with.
As far as the weak/strong thing goes its largely subjective I'm guessing.
If I actually try to fix this, the challenge will be fitting the rhythm in in a way that doesn't torture the syntax--not a concern I had a few decades ago
As far as the weak/strong thing goes its largely subjective I'm guessing.
If I actually try to fix this, the challenge will be fitting the rhythm in in a way that doesn't torture the syntax--not a concern I had a few decades ago
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson