The creator is dead

[grannyjill]

That is a great word image grannygill, rumpled bed, books and scripts scattered,perhaps dust motes dancing in a single ray of light, even though some of his works are not complete and which adds to the character I see his personality everywhere in the room and while it remains untouched, his poetry which includes poet and the room is everlasting!

Sorry that I can't help you with any real crit!

Cheers jiminy

Real crit? This is great...I reckon most of what you've written would make another poem (or even be incorporated into this one)....especially the dust motes dancing in a single ray of light....lovely imagery there. And you have seen exactly what I was seeing - what more could I ask?

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The creator is dead....I am beginning to hate that title (I don't know why I ever changed it from the old one).
Erthona
'bed-sitting room' - is a commmon-place phrase in UK...used in regard to dingy small 'lets' where all the amenities are in one room (including a kitchenette)...a more modern equivalent of a garret.
'bed-sitting' was a late addition to the poem put there to hint that there is no money, or fame in poetry.

After some deliberation I decided against using your new ending since it would have been too much of a steal!