12-20-2011, 04:27 AM
I've been backwards and forwards over this several times - and I've decided that it charts the rise and fall of a love affair...ending in tragedy. There are some nice 'bits' in it...like 'sniper Hans' and the swarming bees....which stand out from the crowd.
I wonder if you could think of a a different word instead of 'saucer' -since that seems close to a cliche for me (I think because it features in a children's story - The TinderBox I think it was called) but that is just a minor comment.
I wonder if you could think of a a different word instead of 'saucer' -since that seems close to a cliche for me (I think because it features in a children's story - The TinderBox I think it was called) but that is just a minor comment.