12-16-2011, 11:38 AM
Personally I'd line it out differently. Maybe cut it some like
can art
condensed cream
(congealed) tomato ( not sure about the use of trope)...
Of course of this I can da loose it. Seems a better title would be "being a modern can". Does seem like a mixture of Warhol (mainly) and a dab of Tom Robbins, but I really have no idea what this is suppose to be saying, or what image it is suppose to engender in the reader.
Overall it seems satirical, I'm just not sure what it is satirizing....or not.
Dale
Is posterised suppose to be posturised, or is it a play on the word poster. If the second I would write it poster-ized so as to avoid confusion.
If this is mainly about Warhol, maybe a title to reflect that, otherwise it makes it a bit obscure.
can art
condensed cream
(congealed) tomato ( not sure about the use of trope)...
Of course of this I can da loose it. Seems a better title would be "being a modern can". Does seem like a mixture of Warhol (mainly) and a dab of Tom Robbins, but I really have no idea what this is suppose to be saying, or what image it is suppose to engender in the reader.
Overall it seems satirical, I'm just not sure what it is satirizing....or not.
Dale
Is posterised suppose to be posturised, or is it a play on the word poster. If the second I would write it poster-ized so as to avoid confusion.
If this is mainly about Warhol, maybe a title to reflect that, otherwise it makes it a bit obscure.
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.