Danu's Sorrow

[billy]

I'm afraid that I can only say that you guys are way out of my league with these. I feel bad because I don't do a lot of crit lately, but it is hard for me to understand what is happening. Google fails me for some of this stuff.

The wording is nice. I actually loved 'dazzle blinded' even though I didn't understand at the time the story. I really don't know much of it now, but I can definitely see that you've placed a majesty behind it as a background. Nice work and a great ending.

in the words of bruce forsythe, just say what you see