12-07-2011, 09:16 PM
hi karren.
i agree with what's been said so far.
the thing i'll mention is the I's. there are I poems and IF poems and even YOU poems. for me this isn't an I poe, most of the I's can be removed. if you take out every I you can you'll see the difference.
thanks for the read.
i agree with what's been said so far.
the thing i'll mention is the I's. there are I poems and IF poems and even YOU poems. for me this isn't an I poe, most of the I's can be removed. if you take out every I you can you'll see the difference.
thanks for the read.