11-26-2011, 07:43 PM
Hi, Karren
I used to rhyme just as you do here, but I found that it forced me to concentrate all my creative energies in finding rhymes, rather than on making my poetry memorable and interesting for others to read....and it made me a poorer poet than I could be. I think this applies to you here.
Your poem is a personal message which is of interest only to the one you are addressing it to. I think this is why you have received no response.
I used to rhyme just as you do here, but I found that it forced me to concentrate all my creative energies in finding rhymes, rather than on making my poetry memorable and interesting for others to read....and it made me a poorer poet than I could be. I think this applies to you here.
Your poem is a personal message which is of interest only to the one you are addressing it to. I think this is why you have received no response.