The Hobbyist

The Hobbyist

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10-28-2011, 01:18 PM

it's far from sucking hehe. i think some work can be done on the 2nd verse L3 and 4.
for me it just needs a bit of clarity. but that jmo.
anyway it certainly doesn't suck

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The Hobbyist - by Wildcard - 10-26-2011, 04:57 AM

RE: The Hobbyist - by abu nuwas - 10-27-2011, 07:53 AM

RE: The Hobbyist - by addy - 10-27-2011, 10:31 AM

RE: The Hobbyist - by Wildcard - 10-27-2011, 10:55 AM

RE: The Hobbyist - by billy - 10-28-2011, 08:22 AM

RE: The Hobbyist - by Wildcard - 10-28-2011, 10:49 AM

RE: The Hobbyist - by billy - 10-28-2011, 01:18 PM

RE: The Hobbyist - by Wildcard - 10-28-2011, 10:16 PM

RE: The Hobbyist - by grannyjill - 10-29-2011, 04:52 PM

RE: The Hobbyist - by Wildcard - 10-29-2011, 07:11 PM

RE: The Hobbyist - by billy - 10-30-2011, 02:40 PM

RE: The Hobbyist - by Wildcard - 10-31-2011, 12:58 AM

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