10-28-2011, 11:39 AM
not my topic of choice i'll admit. but that's the reason why I read, if that makes sense. some thoughts
(10-18-2011, 06:19 PM)billy Wrote: Sweat around my groin is thick white ..starts with a hammer, gotta sayI don't know, but this feels unfinished to me. did not expect it to stop where it did, which makes me wonder about the message. just my thoughts
the cheese under my fingernail stinks.
Pleasant
like the black bits from between my toes..I really like the "bits". I think it's better to keep it up to the imagination
after a hike up Ben Nevis.I kind of thought the idea was already done. I mean, I can see why this is here, but it also does not strike me as crucial information.
I always sniff before bathing,
It has to be done; ..now, I don't know why this has to be done. will say that I do like the tone of resignation
as does the way I fart
under the cover
of darkness and duvet,
sniggering at protestations.
In the bath
I reach round to spray my crack,
let the skin get wet at the top of the groove
so i can roll away the dry dead flakes...debated to to whether or not you need "dry" and "dead" when describing "flakes". might be too redundant
While I'm washing my head
the tattoo of water from the resting shower
gives me a stonker of an erection.
I don't masturbate in the dirty water,
the smeg turns into little spunk balls
and sticks to the hair on my legs.
Written only for you to consider.

