Something Else

Something Else

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#10

10-18-2011, 06:47 PM

I really like the formatting and line breaks. They allow the words to roll off the tongue nicely. I think the others have commented on much of the content of the poem. So I'll just add that I found it easy to read and understand. I enjoyed it very much.

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Something Else - by Philatone - 10-14-2011, 04:39 AM

RE: Something Else - by billy - 10-14-2011, 07:59 PM

RE: Something Else - by Wildcard - 10-14-2011, 10:55 PM

RE: Something Else - by Leanne - 10-15-2011, 06:35 AM

RE: Something Else - by Patrick Traveler - 10-16-2011, 07:05 PM

RE: Something Else - by billy - 10-17-2011, 11:42 AM

RE: Something Else - by Ca ne fait rien - 10-18-2011, 01:38 AM

RE: Something Else - by Philatone - 10-18-2011, 01:10 PM

RE: Something Else - by billy - 10-18-2011, 05:52 PM

RE: Something Else - by John Holland - 10-18-2011, 06:47 PM

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