10-18-2011, 01:10 PM
thanks for the comments guys, always appreciated of course. couple of quick notes on cultural references several people brought up. "suits" does refer to news anchors; can alter if it is not clear enough. likewise, Locust refers to a relatively common street name, and the 20 does (loosely) as well--thought the "corner" might bring the street names out more, but I'll see if I can add another reference or two. Leanne- consider the apostrophe lost (not sure how it got there in the first place). thanks for the comments on the tone.
i'm glad you guys were able to relate to this to some degree, like you patrick! mark, will have a look at the hyphenation. appreciate the compliments! i hope to mix things up as best as I can, though I never seem able to break from some images and other things during certain periods. i've heard stranger stories on rednecks
thanks for the comments on the transitions, billy. ca ne, i'll take a look at the intro. it was a fear I had about opening that way; may have to sleep on it a bit.
i'm glad you guys were able to relate to this to some degree, like you patrick! mark, will have a look at the hyphenation. appreciate the compliments! i hope to mix things up as best as I can, though I never seem able to break from some images and other things during certain periods. i've heard stranger stories on rednecks
thanks for the comments on the transitions, billy. ca ne, i'll take a look at the intro. it was a fear I had about opening that way; may have to sleep on it a bit.
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