10-16-2011, 07:05 PM
I got it all except for "seeing a suit behind a desk,/the television falls asleep again,/a curtain pulled like a plug." It just confused me.
Your description of the neighborhood set a complete scene in my mind and evoked a bit of sadness as I am old enough to have seen this happen to the places I lived. Good write.
Your description of the neighborhood set a complete scene in my mind and evoked a bit of sadness as I am old enough to have seen this happen to the places I lived. Good write.