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The Back of the Cave
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10-12-2011, 07:11 AM
"Several inches" is needed because the narrator hasn't been pushed all the way out of stasis, just a short distance.
I see what you mean about "heart". Would "life" work better? Thanks for the feedback AA 
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe
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The Back of the Cave - by heslopian - 10-11-2011, 04:06 PM
RE: The Back of the Cave - by Wildcard - 10-12-2011, 01:39 AM
RE: The Back of the Cave - by heslopian - 10-12-2011, 07:11 AM
RE: The Back of the Cave - by Wildcard - 10-12-2011, 07:39 AM
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RE: The Back of the Cave - by heslopian - 10-12-2011, 01:05 PM
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RE: The Back of the Cave - by addy - 10-13-2011, 03:23 PM
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