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Surreal
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10-09-2011, 11:22 PM
To me, this poem is beyond my critiquing ability. I'm not sure if there is some form involved (I think not) but regardless the effect is wonderful. It feels calm and crisp. I did get the 'iambic' reference (I wasn't thinking Shakespeare, but older poetry in general) and I like 'spondaic' (like Billy said) but not as much.
Great work, Aish. You've outdone yourself IMO Thanks for sharing. |
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RE: Surreal - by Leanne - 07-30-2011, 06:18 PM
RE: Surreal - by Aish - 07-30-2011, 06:26 PM
RE: Surreal - by Leanne - 07-30-2011, 09:20 PM
RE: Surreal - by Todd - 07-31-2011, 12:47 AM
RE: Surreal - by billy - 07-31-2011, 09:50 AM
RE: Surreal - by Aish - 10-08-2011, 02:54 AM
RE: Surreal - by billy - 10-09-2011, 10:09 AM
RE: Surreal - by Aish - 10-09-2011, 12:43 PM
RE: Surreal - by Wildcard - 10-09-2011, 11:22 PM
RE: Surreal - by Aish - 10-10-2011, 03:36 AM
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