For K

[abu nuwas]

between the lines (i should have said) and jolly or sad, who gives a fu toss as long as you put it up
it gives me to long a pause. (could just be me of course)

Thank you, Billy. For all my doubts about workshopping, I continually find there is stuff which I had not been conscious of, or which really is instructive. I should rather listen to Leanne and Todd, especially, than any number of Creative Writing lecturers.

PS Where do we stand with this f---- business? Is it all open for kids, so mind your tongue?