09-28-2011, 07:24 PM
John, thanks for reading and for your comments which are very kind.
Addy,
Thank you very much for you assessment of my poem. I think I see what you mean and what you said might help me to clear up the confusion. I might even try the last 2 lines as:
mud-fight winners humiliated.
I'll have to give it another look after work. Thanks, again.
Addy,
Thank you very much for you assessment of my poem. I think I see what you mean and what you said might help me to clear up the confusion. I might even try the last 2 lines as:
mud-fight winners humiliated.
I'll have to give it another look after work. Thanks, again.