(content) just fiction
#4
Strong poem with a confronting theme. I quite like the format and line breaks.

My favourite passage is:

"all the neon dust jackets
like bar signs slicing through the dark"

I don't have any nits to pick either. Wink
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(content) just fiction - by heslopian - 09-27-2011, 06:48 PM
RE: just fiction - by billy - 09-28-2011, 11:50 AM
RE: just fiction - by heslopian - 09-28-2011, 04:03 PM
RE: just fiction - by addy - 09-28-2011, 12:25 PM
RE: just fiction - by John Holland - 09-28-2011, 02:18 PM



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