Invocation
#5
The poem is quite nice in its simplicity, much like an artist who relies on a subtlety of color. The only thing I would add is a suggestion to drop any extraneous words such as “the” whenever possible.

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Invocation - by Aish - 09-23-2011, 02:57 PM
RE: Invocation - by billy - 09-24-2011, 09:47 PM
RE: Invocation - by Todd - 09-24-2011, 10:51 PM
RE: Invocation - by Leanne - 09-25-2011, 05:30 PM
RE: Invocation - by ICSoria - 09-26-2011, 12:05 AM



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