Invocation
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"meteoric ants" reminds me of how they look when you burn them with a magnifying glass... I've mentioned these evil tendencies of mine before, haven't I? The sibilant words, coupled with the title, give this quite an arcane feel -- but "naked seclusion" speaks to me of an unhappy relationship, lying exposed and alone, which would make those sibilant words whispered arguments in the dark. I do love multilayered poems Smile
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Invocation - by Aish - 09-23-2011, 02:57 PM
RE: Invocation - by billy - 09-24-2011, 09:47 PM
RE: Invocation - by Todd - 09-24-2011, 10:51 PM
RE: Invocation - by Leanne - 09-25-2011, 05:30 PM
RE: Invocation - by ICSoria - 09-26-2011, 12:05 AM



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