09-25-2011, 05:30 PM
"meteoric ants" reminds me of how they look when you burn them with a magnifying glass... I've mentioned these evil tendencies of mine before, haven't I? The sibilant words, coupled with the title, give this quite an arcane feel -- but "naked seclusion" speaks to me of an unhappy relationship, lying exposed and alone, which would make those sibilant words whispered arguments in the dark. I do love multilayered poems
It could be worse
