Invocation

[billy]

oooa, love sibilant, would 'wet' look any good in front of coals to carry on the image? still trying to get a handle on the last line. i like the wuse of white space, normally it isn't used as it should be, (for me that's not the case here.) nothing else to say except i think the first six lines work really well on their own jmo

thanks for the read.

Sibilant words
drop like coals
from plaint mouths;

meteoric ants

marching

to the doctrinal corpuscles
of naked seclusion.