09-23-2011, 10:16 AM
A couple more things. I hope you do not alter 'whitethorn', as it enriches the language, and the Lord knows the pressures to degrade it are great enough!
Also, re Todd's comment, sae-breezes are the opposite of land-breezes, coming off the sea. For that reason alone, for me at least, there is enough salt as is.
Also, re Todd's comment, sae-breezes are the opposite of land-breezes, coming off the sea. For that reason alone, for me at least, there is enough salt as is.

