09-22-2011, 11:21 AM
(09-22-2011, 12:14 AM)AvariciousApathist Wrote: slammed the door a littlei presume mud fight is aka mudslinging
too hard this time.
shattered pane
gave way to banshee breaths,
humiliating mud-fight
winners
the very last line confused me
love the title. shattered pain/pane works on two levels.
i think if you could sort out the last line (maybe with a no preceding winners) it would help dramatically.
thanks for the read.
