A Long Division

A Long Division

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09-22-2011, 07:42 AM

Hi AA,

I'd like to comment but the ending sort of lost me, and I don't want to suggest any changes when I'm not clear on the content.

It's a little too closed off to me (though again I could just be missing something obvious).

Best,

Todd

The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson

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A Long Division - by Wildcard - 09-22-2011, 12:14 AM

RE: A Long Division - by grannyjill - 09-22-2011, 06:49 AM

RE: A Long Division - by Wildcard - 09-22-2011, 07:24 AM

RE: A Long Division - by Todd - 09-22-2011, 07:42 AM

RE: A Long Division - by Wildcard - 09-22-2011, 07:51 AM

RE: A Long Division - by Todd - 09-22-2011, 07:55 AM

RE: A Long Division - by billy - 09-22-2011, 11:21 AM

RE: A Long Division - by Wildcard - 09-22-2011, 01:26 PM

RE: A Long Division - by Aish - 09-23-2011, 01:15 AM

RE: A Long Division - by Wildcard - 09-23-2011, 05:23 AM

RE: A Long Division - by ICSoria - 09-28-2011, 08:42 PM

RE: A Long Division - by abu nuwas - 09-23-2011, 06:47 AM

RE: A Long Division - by Wildcard - 09-23-2011, 09:22 AM

RE: A Long Division - by heslopian - 09-24-2011, 04:24 AM

RE: A Long Division - by Wildcard - 09-24-2011, 04:29 AM

RE: A Long Division - by John Holland - 09-28-2011, 02:39 PM

RE: A Long Division - by addy - 09-28-2011, 04:11 PM

RE: A Long Division - by Wildcard - 09-28-2011, 07:24 PM

RE: A Long Division - by Wildcard - 09-29-2011, 05:38 AM

RE: A Long Division - by Wildcard - 10-15-2011, 01:43 AM

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