09-22-2011, 07:24 AM
Hi Jill,
I think you were on the right track in the beginning and the point that you are contesting is the most important one.
As for the tense, I'll have a look at it. Thanks for reading and offering your advice.
I think you were on the right track in the beginning and the point that you are contesting is the most important one.

As for the tense, I'll have a look at it. Thanks for reading and offering your advice.

