09-16-2011, 01:45 AM
Thank you for all your help, Billy!
So - I think I will rearrange things a bit and post this as a short but regular piece, because I like
the bedtime story vibe. I will, however, work on writing a new haiku or senryu today.
Billy, I re-worked this a little bit. Can you move it somewhere such as mild critique?
So - I think I will rearrange things a bit and post this as a short but regular piece, because I like
the bedtime story vibe. I will, however, work on writing a new haiku or senryu today.
Billy, I re-worked this a little bit. Can you move it somewhere such as mild critique?
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?