Rorschach

Rorschach

billy Offline

Are you alluding to me?

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09-15-2011, 06:03 PM

seriously Aish, it feels a lot tighter with just that small edit
and believe it or not i think it affects how i read the poem as a whole.
for some reason the long lines don't seem as long now Huh

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Rorschach - by Aish - 09-15-2011, 06:18 AM

RE: Rorschach - by billy - 09-15-2011, 11:22 AM

RE: Rorschach - by Aish - 09-15-2011, 04:30 PM

RE: Rorschach - by billy - 09-15-2011, 06:03 PM

RE: Rorschach - by Todd - 09-15-2011, 10:56 PM

RE: Rorschach - by Aish - 09-16-2011, 03:39 AM

RE: Rorschach - by Wildcard - 09-16-2011, 06:51 AM

RE: Rorschach - by Aish - 09-16-2011, 06:54 AM

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