09-13-2011, 03:32 AM
(09-11-2011, 12:52 AM)Heslopian Wrote: Passing round rub on tattoosNot long ago, I would have never considered writing a poem about porn unless it was meant to be funny. You make me see that the subject is made more viable because it hasn't been over used. Thanks for reminding me that creative options are only limited by imagination.
a stage hand weaves between tripods,
some erected, some discarded. creates a nice opportunity for double meaning
The bed is made, lights are set.
All the best technology
surrounds this simple scene.
When viewed by lonely men in rooms
dark and close, like time capsules,
the red faced director It's great that you make me see a particular face with the simple line. I think it might be 'red-faced', though.
might never have breathed.
Actors cast aside the sheets,
think of home and click their heels.

