Thoughts of You

[Leanne]

Hello there, and welcome! This is very heartfelt and moving, with the imagery of the lake setting the mood nicely. There are a few lines that could do with a bit of work, so I'll just touch on some of those here.

You are my peaceful place,
All I have to do is imagine your face.
Who would have ever known,
That you would be the one for which I would long. -- should really be "for whom", but this line itself is too long, you could try "that it would be you for whom I would long".

Ripples upon the lake,
Wanting it all to be fake.
Wind blowing my hair,
Screaming out this isn’t fair.

I jump as the cranes sing their songs, -- I really like this image
Wishing that you were not gone.
For you were the one by my side,
Now in whom am I to confide.

The water lapping against the shore,
Wondering what am I doing this for.
Searching for some hidden meaning,
The sound of your voice is what I am feining. -- do you mean this word to be "feigning"? If so, are you sure it's exactly the right word for what you mean to say?

Blue skies linger above,
Forever seeking your love.
Green grass dancing in the wind,
On this day I am missing my friend.

I send my rock across the lake,
Only doing this for your sake.
Two no three times it skips,
If only I could touch your lips.

I wander along the shore,
Never wanting you more.
I stop and fall to my knees,
Come back to me I’m begging you please.

Not there to answer my call,
No one to catch me as I fall.
Looking down at the sand,
I can almost feel you reach for my hand.

You are my sunshine is what you would say,
Don't be sad for me another day.
Forever keep me in your heart,
And there we will never be apart.

I force myself to stand,
Pretending that you grabbed my hand.
I take one last glance around,
Feeling as if it is peace that I have found. -- you could take out "that" here

This is a really good start, thanks for posting